this is really wat its like huh

I used 2 b the kid that could have anything he wanted
and if she said no she probably fronted
but there was this 1 girl I loved until she left me
just wasn't right that's y im a lefty
she filled me wit false hopes and dreams
bout how we were gonna b 2gether no matter the means
and there wasn't a sadder moment from when I cried
and my faith n a loyal girl suddenly died
and then I met this girl I could c myself loving
got so crazy she would call me her husband
its crazy cuz when I see her talking 2 other dudes
I wanna say excuse me im not tryna b rude
but this is kinda my girl whether u like it or not
so stop tryna replace me or take my spot
but yet i cant cuz it aint n my place
so i just sit in the cut wit this look on my face
don't wanna rush it but got a fear I might loose her
cuz as u can c there's a lot of guys that would easily choose her
but I decided 2 go on the path love leads me
and if its2 her heart im not letting go believe me

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Deleted User Dec 19, 2007 at 10:22pm
AWWW DIS IS SWEET ON SO MANY LEVELS WHO EVER YOUR RITING ABOUT NEED TO REALIZE THAT SHE HAS A GD THANG B4 ITS GONE KEEP DOIN YOU ANOTHER FAV
 
highoffdasoundofreal Nov 4, 2007 at 7:09pm
awww thiz so sweet i hope the girl realize wat rite in front of her
 
singfield Oct 25, 2007 at 9:23pm
diis poem iiz deep.... ii liike iit more denu can iimagiine. 10 starzz. keep on wriitiin
 
Dat Harlem Chic Oct 25, 2007 at 7:40pm
Oh wow. I love this poem so much. "just wasnt right that's y im a lefty"...how clever. Whatever girl this is dedicated to is a verrryyy lucky lady.
 

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