Music (my first love)

His pain is my blues
His mind is my neo soul
HIs attitude and mentality
is that little bit of rock n roll

His heart is my beat
His voice is my jazz
His intellectual conversation
Is the realness hip-hop has

He is the melody to my song
His faith is my gospel
His touch is a genre I never had
Its the relaxation of classical

His eyes show the perfect picture
His body is the perfect frame
But its the endless love songs he sings
That gives him his perfect name


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Kearns Aug 5, 2012 at 5:08am
Nice extended metaphor! It could have become tired, but you kept it fresh throughout. Good work!
BiiBii Jul 10, 2009 at 9:56pm
WOW das wrd we share the same love of music
Twan G Feb 12, 2009 at 1:53pm
A this was really great when i took my time to read it.i am really feeling this got need to keep writing.i had to add this to my fav..i love music too.great way to put it.100stars
B0N3S Feb 3, 2009 at 11:21pm
music is everything and everywhere got to love it. great analogues 10/10
Tiara Hardy Nov 10, 2008 at 12:32pm
great. just great!!!!!!!!!!
jamal Apr 16, 2008 at 9:38pm
this is what my life revolves around... usic is an intergral part of me... but this is real good shit ma
DEATH Apr 14, 2008 at 2:17pm
yeah, i like to escape in songs too, get my mind wrapped up in them so hard that everything else in the world doesnt even matter while its on... she's that little peace of everything, and yeah, i call music my she, lol, DEATHhasSPOKEN!
Babi Rica Apr 14, 2008 at 1:15pm
i loved it!! i know how you feel forreal. really good right. this song by Common.
GeminiBorn Apr 14, 2008 at 2:34am
I Love This!!! Music makes up a lot of what I am, it serves as a great release. So much truth in these words and the concept is on point. I had been considering doing a write on music and now I KNOW i have to, thanks for the inspiration. 10 and a fav
ghetto romeo Apr 12, 2008 at 4:56pm
like this one in perticular love the passion and how u discribe the person with music true words spoken from within i give it a ten
Deleted User Apr 12, 2008 at 2:05am
wow that was really good...real love for music i can relate...excellent write
2Smoove Apr 11, 2008 at 10:39pm
yo i was impressed with this one....this is a fave!!!!
♥.marie. Apr 11, 2008 at 12:21pm
wow this was brilliant - i truly enjoyed this... im goin to have to subscribe poet- well done :)