Savage

Silently
Avenging me.
Variously throwing slurred words.
Announcing that you better be heard.
Going thru it behind you.
Expecting this to never quite be finished, never quite be thru.

You are.. the fear in a child's heart.
The reason relationships fall apart.
You are.. selfishness.
You are.. selflessness.
You are.. hate.
My only mistake.
You are.. Savageness.
Always throwin' more, but never takin' less.

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Nixxy Jul 5, 2007 at 12:29am
HA!!!...DayumZ Nii`...yooh diid thiis one up type niice son...ii love that last liine son...Ahh man
 
phatbaby Jul 4, 2007 at 3:56am
thats good im going to read all of yo poems in do time
 
Shadow [O.D] Jul 2, 2007 at 5:27pm
"always throwin' more, but never takin' less" I love this line! It said it all for me. good write nena.
 
Scriptixz Jul 2, 2007 at 9:39am
damn...sighs all angry don't you just hate it when you're trying to get into the zone and cats be all up in your ear???????!!!!!!!! DAMN!!!!!!!! i can't even read this joint in peace arghhhhhhhhhh for fuccz sakes man!
 

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