Jealous (part II of "Thug Cry" )

Boy Pov

Writing about me will always be da reallest ish you eva wrote
I'm da blunt I'm da reallest ish you'll eva smoke
Nothing I had with u will eva be a big ass joke
Trynna get ova da fact yo ass up an let me go
Find it funny how you didn't tell bout da shit you did
Rumors round town sayin yo ass up and fucked my friend
Nah you ain't tell em bout da shit you did
Steady trynna hide all da muthafuckin shit you did

Girl Pov

How can I tell em when there's nothing to even be told
I know you bought dem rumors yep...yo ass was sold
Look at me do it look like I would fuck yo friend
But I know his ugly ass probably wish I did
And when you start believing otha peoples words ova mine
Love let me put dis thought back in yo mind
Who stayed by yo side when you was doing time
And if you asked me too I woulda took da blame fa dat crime
And ever since I let you go all my thoughts have been off track
Guess what I'm trynna say is love still lives an I want you back

(long silence)

Boy Pov
Damn I can easily do you how you did me
But ma do you think yo tears will even faze me?
Yea they will cuz unlike you I ain't crazy
Cuz in my heart you'll always be my lady
But in reality (sigh) I can't be wit u
Vowed to my new gurl I wouldn't do her like I did you
You dug deep made a thug cry ma dats da worst
But you no longer in da race ...my new girls first
And what if I told you her engagement ring is bigger than yours
Damn ya anger brangs da steam right thru ya pores
I can see right thru you
Your more den mad...more den hurt ...ma you feelin rebellious
Da expression on ya face shows yo ass is jeolous

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LostGurl Jul 1, 2007 at 12:32am
I feel you I like the way that this was put together. Your very creative.
 
j babi Jun 19, 2007 at 2:44pm
dang girl you did ya thing i realy liked this nice write
 
mZ*p03+!K k0T0uR Jun 15, 2007 at 5:43pm
WHAT!~!!!!!! YOU DID THIS GO HEAD GIRL EMOTION REALNESS THUG LUVE PASSION EVERYTHING WAS IN THIS I CAN DIG IT GOTTA FAVE THIS ONE TO YOU BROUGHTTHE REAL KEEP IT HOT
 
Mrs Twist Jun 15, 2007 at 1:00am
ur good at wut u do nothin else needs to be said
 
Docc Jun 15, 2007 at 12:02am
damn ma all i gotta say
 
PK Jun 14, 2007 at 11:34pm
Speechless...
 
pimp slick Jun 14, 2007 at 11:30pm
your just talented arent ya, keep it up, always put your heart in it
 
DatGuhShawty Jun 14, 2007 at 11:29pm
I forgot to say this going down as one of my favorite poems.
 
DatGuhShawty Jun 14, 2007 at 11:28pm
I am loving it girl the flow was tight.It also hot and nice well written I am loving it girl.Keep bring them i am going keep loving it
 
Scottie-b Jun 14, 2007 at 11:25pm
yo this shyt right here is tight, but I really like da way err body else is doin callabos, and you did this all by yo self, nice write ten starz
 
Pretty Lil Ladi Jun 14, 2007 at 11:23pm
Hell ya...Lovin dis
 
sweet _skittles101 Jun 14, 2007 at 11:08pm
diz iz hott...anotha good 1....
 
Babi Rica Jun 14, 2007 at 11:03pm
dam i love the intense feeling u giving off on this one....u should really write a book like "mickey boo" said i kno i would read it and i bet it would help a lot of ppl
 
Mickey~Boo Jun 14, 2007 at 10:52pm
Damn.................... Girl You Need To Write A Damn Book!!! I Would Buy It!! You Got MAD Skillz Im Talkin Bout Off Da Chart Shit!!
 
Mani Jun 14, 2007 at 10:48pm
damn he is still fucked up...i wouldnt have it...id kill her ass then get her ring...lol..jus kidding..i like this tho its kinda sad
 
LUCYFROMCHOBEE Jun 14, 2007 at 10:46pm
ITS GOOD I LIKE IT JEOLOUS MIGHT BE IT
 
WHIPQUEEN727 Jun 14, 2007 at 10:44pm
DAMN DIS MAD HOT I LIKE IT
 
kell Jun 14, 2007 at 10:44pm
im feelin u on that 1, 2. u got mad skillz girl. this one was the bomb. cant wait to chek out pt. II. again keep writin, thats u obviously have a gift.
 
ResultOfMahPensLove Jun 14, 2007 at 10:43pm
THIS POEM ALMOST MADE ME CRY I WAS JUST WRITIN A POEM LIKE THIS CALLED JUST TRUST ME IT'LL BE UP IN A FEW BUT 10 STARZ AND YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB IM IN MY CHEST FORREAL RIGHT NOW
 
smooch Jun 14, 2007 at 10:40pm
this was hot im glad i checked ya poetry out
 
peanut lol(burnt) Jun 14, 2007 at 10:38pm
u gud girl and i like how u put diz 2gether
 
msanna Jun 14, 2007 at 10:37pm
That was good also
 
Lyrical ladii Ti Jun 14, 2007 at 10:36pm
OH THAT WAS HOT. VERY HOT!! II LOVED IT!!!! KUDOS. MADD KUDOS.
 

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